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Penname: simplytoopretty [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Member Since: 03/17/2008
Membership status: Member

Reviews by simplytoopretty
Cosmopolitan by Firebunny [adult only]
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Chloe was drunk.  What' Clark's excuse?
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent, Lois Lane; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: None
Incarnation: None
Timeline: None
Warnings: graphic sex
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 8433; Read Count: 12614; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/26/2008; Published: 03/26/2008
Reviewer: simplytoopretty (Signed)
05/02/2008
I loved this. It was hilarious. Clark and Chloe are so oblivious to their feelings that they need to be literally smacked into realizing it. I like the whole '2 sides' bit near the end and how excited Chloe was at realizing that her feelings were reciprocated. It could never play out on the show like this, but that's why fanfiction is wonderful because we get awesome writers like you making Chlark fun and smutty.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Chapter 7: Part Seven
Chloe Sullivan was a realist these days, and realists had no time for fantasies.
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: angst
Incarnation: Chloe and Clark [friends]
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 248; Read Count: 2007; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04/22/2008; Published: 04/22/2008
Reviewer: simplytoopretty (Signed)
04/29/2008
I love how much you manage to say in such a short piece. I love the idea of Chloe wanting to be a realist. I especially love the last line. It hurts but it's wonderful.

Author's Response: I think that\'s possibly the best thing I could have read about this. Thank you so much!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
One day they collide and set in motion the life they’ll lead. What they end up with is the consequence of the choices they’ve made. Set in the future although with no set timeline.
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: angst, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2089; Read Count: 2302; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04/29/2008; Published: 04/29/2008
Reviewer: simplytoopretty (Signed)
07/12/2008
Thanks for reading!
Chapter 1: And Then We Collide
Chloe's tired of missing the beginning of everything.
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 847; Read Count: 2387; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/01/2008; Published: 05/01/2008
Reviewer: simplytoopretty (Signed)
05/02/2008
That was sweet and awesome. I loved the way you took the theme and did it rather uniquely. Very enjoyable.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wrote it super-fast trying to get it in before the theme was over, but I guess it came out okay. In the first draft, Chloe was a lot more shrill and upset and the proposal was a lot more elaborate, but I figured less is more, and it came out better. Thanks for the review!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It was written in the stars.  It was meant to be.  And Lois knows it.
Categories: ; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent, Lois Lane; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 273; Read Count: 2205; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/13/2008; Published: 05/13/2008
Reviewer: simplytoopretty (Signed)
05/13/2008
That was sweet. I like how you wrote it from Lois's perspective. It gave the story an additional level of sweetness-Lois being happy for her cousin and Clark is nice to see.

Author's Response:

Thank you.

I honestly believe Lois would be really happy for Clark and Chloe.  She's seen them together.  She knows how Chloe feels about Clark.  She, herself, has no designs on Clark, so she probably wants them to be together and knows they'll make each other happy.

Chapter 1: The Kiss of Destiny