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Penname: Mari2Anne [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 06/07/2008
Membership status: Member

Reviews by Mari2Anne
Clark doesn't know what to get Chloe for Christmas.
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent, Martha Kent; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff, friendship
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: season 5
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 793; Read Count: 1065; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/18/2007; Published: 06/18/2007
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/22/2009

Ah, so young and yet wise enough to know:

[quote]:

“Mom, I know nothing about women.”

Very, very sweet story.

Chapter 1: Chapter 1
by []
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: None
Incarnation: None
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/02/2009
Very intense and sad; excellent writing.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
by []
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: None
Incarnation: None
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
06/20/2008
Glad you did what you said you would never do.  Your Chloisy "drabble" was very good. 

Author's Response: Since it\'s the only one I\'ll ever do it better be good. ;)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It's not easy sleeping with Clark Kent.
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff, humor, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1950; Read Count: 2620; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12/28/2007; Published: 12/28/2007
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/13/2009

Ah, Chloe has a sweet evil streak, letting that 220 pounds of man 'streak' about on his rescue mission.

Very funny story...



Author's Response: Thank you.  I can respect and appreciate Chloe brand of sweet evil.
Chapter 1: 220 lbs. of Man
Clark mulls over the pros and cons of a physical relationship with Chloe
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Clark Kent; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff, humor
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 738; Read Count: 984; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/27/2008; Published: 02/27/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
12/21/2008
Very funny; I think Dr Seuss might think so, too, as he rolls over in his grave, laughing.
Chapter 1: Clark's Inner Monologue
Beat by h2osprincess [teen]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]

This is the most burdensome gift of the yellow sun.  It gives him the means, and therefore the responsibility, to choose.

Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan as Lois Lane, Clark Kent, Jimmy Olsen, Lex Luthor, Perry White; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: angst, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: death
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 13384; Read Count: 8753; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/08/2008; Published: 03/04/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
09/01/2008
That was a wonderful story.  Had me in tears a few times.  Very glad it had a happy ending.  Thank you for sharing.
Chapter 5: Part 5
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Clark visiting Chloe's dorm in early season five for just hanging out… and gets a little more than he bargained for.

Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent, Martha Kent; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff, friendship, humor, hurt/comfort
Incarnation: Chloe and Clark [friends]
Timeline: season 5
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2333; Read Count: 1457; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/09/2008; Published: 03/07/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
06/07/2008
Very sweet and so realistic with all the awful flu symptoms: yuch! and your characters so true: Martha, the eternal Mom; Clark, the gentleman but still a guy with the appreciative observant eyes; and Chloe, embarrassed but not enough to send him away and always able to laugh at herself.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
by []
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: None
Incarnation: None
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/10/2010
And the one time was absolutely PERFECT!
Chapter 1: Passionate Kisses
Nightingale by TheAmazingApe [adult only]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Chloe surrenders to her power.
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: angst, dark, hurt/comfort, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: graphic sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 5816; Read Count: 1292; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/06/2008; Published: 05/06/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/14/2008

How very very sad, made me ache with sorrow for them.  Excellent writing, felt the emotion in each word.

 

Chapter 1: Nightingale
Two Friends 2 by EllyF [adult only]
[Reviews - 1]
Clark and Chloe try to balance their new relationship with work problems.  Pizza and sex abound.
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: season 7
Warnings: graphic sex
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents Series: Two Friends
Word count: 4229; Read Count: 1749; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/12/2008; Published: 05/12/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
12/21/2008
Funny.  Your writing is so descriptive; actually made me hungry for pizza.  Excellent work.
Chapter 4: Two Friends, One Happy Ending
After the events of "Arctic", during the Summer of 2008, Chloe and Clark wind up spending a lot of time together as they figure out where their lives are going.
Categories: ; Characters: Bart Allen [Impulse], Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent, Gabe Sullivan, Jimmy Olsen, Lois Lane, Martha Kent, Oliver Queen [Green Arrow]; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: Lois/Oliver
Genre: angst, friendship, romance
Incarnation: Chloe and Clark [friends], Chloe/Clark
Timeline: season 7
Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 47917; Read Count: 34991; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/20/2008; Published: 06/17/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
06/21/2008
This story was wonderful.  So much detail in the "normal" farm life of Clark and how Chloe learned to live within that life without all her modern day communication gadgets.  You did so well in describing her frustrations, her awareness of how lucky she was to not be in jail, and how both she and Clark grew up so much during those three months.  You made it all very interesting.  The New York street vendor pretzels still make my mouth water: brought nice memories.  And you were correct in your final post at K-site, I very much enjoyed the extra/bonus scenes in Chapter 4 and 7.  Thanks again for sharing.  Hope you write more very soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, Mari2Anne! I have a weakness for both mundane details and Farmer!Clark (so sexy!), so I'm glad my details were enjoyable and not tedious. Surprisingly, I am really not an animal person-- I don't understand why people want them in their houses, but I enjoyed writing Chloe going totally girly over her cat.
Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Chloe realizes Clark isn't a ghost and becomes determined to bring him back... somehow.  Sequel to "Through the Glass" and "Haunted."
Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: angst, hurt/comfort, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1974; Read Count: 708; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/22/2008; Published: 06/22/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
03/14/2009
A beautiful example of their love and undying loyalty.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Clark apologizes to Chloe after Lex and Lana's engagement party.  Written as a missing scene in Crimson.

 

Categories: Orphan; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: friendship, hurt/comfort
Incarnation: Chloe and Clark [friends]
Timeline: season 6
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1321; Read Count: 1227; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/25/2008; Published: 08/25/2008
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/20/2009
That was such a perfect apology; one that should so have been part of the show. 

Author's Response: Thank you for your review.  I'm happy that you like it.  This apology needed to happen, and I guess, I might have to happen like this if we hold to canon.
Chapter 1: An Apology
by []
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: None
Incarnation: None
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
05/24/2009

And with her sweet and tolerant understanding of Clark's moping ways, I would say that Chloe has a few extra plusses after her 'human-ness' (not sure if there is such a word...)

Loved this story; excellent details of all the emotions behind The Look and how Clark tries to understand the reasons for each person he gets it from.

And so perfect how Chloe knows just how to put it in context and not make it a huge negative issue that he never gets past.

Thank you for sharing.

Chapter 1: The Look
by []
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Categories: Orphan; Characters: None; Type: None
Other Pairings: None
Genre: None
Incarnation: None
Timeline: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 0; Read Count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 12/31/1969; Published: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
05/24/2009

So very sad that Clark's guilt followed him into his dreams to create a new world where he could change the outcome of his actions.

Such excellent writing.  Thank you for sharing.

Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Clark returns from training and fulfills a promise
Categories: ; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 161; Read Count: 941; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/02/2009; Published: 02/02/2009
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/07/2009
You know how to say so very much in so few words; very sweet drabble.
Chapter 1: Right Where We Belong
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Chloe's made Clark late and the world will never be the same.

Categories: ; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: post-series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 172; Read Count: 1147; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/04/2009; Published: 02/04/2009
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/05/2009
Guess his reaction wasn't as non-chalant as she first thought; I'm sure the next scene would have her grinning from ear to ear...
Chapter 1: In a Hurry
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

Even after they finally decided to embark on a relationship based on the events of "House Arrest," Chloe, being as stubborn as she is, has always been unable to believe that her relationship with Clark is the real deal. However, when her cat gets sick, Clark proves without even trying that Chloe is his future.

Categories: ; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: fluff, romance
Incarnation: Chloe/Clark
Timeline: season 7
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 2142; Read Count: 1404; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/22/2009; Published: 05/22/2009
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
05/24/2009

Wow.  I didn't think it was possible for you to make HA end more perfectly; but this little sequel proved me wrong.

What a sweet story...so glad you shared.

Maybe you could post it on that other site also, lots of Chlarkers there need this desperately!

 

 

Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sea Changes by marikology [mature]
starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]

Chloe struggles with her crumbling relationship with Jimmy during a time of change and upheaval. Clark struggles with juggling both his hero and everyday duties. In the midst of this tumultuous period in their lives, they seek solace in the strength of their friendship and take a much-needed vacation together, a cruise. But on the high seas, away from their problems, they decide to cross the friendship boundary and change their relationship forever.

Categories: ; Characters: Chloe Sullivan, Clark Kent, Jimmy Olsen, Lois Lane; Type: Fiction
Other Pairings: None
Genre: angst, friendship, romance
Incarnation: Chloe and Clark [friends], Chloe/Clark
Timeline: season 8
Warnings: graphic sex
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 44687; Read Count: 13228; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/10/2009; Published: 08/10/2009
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/11/2009

Wow.  This was heartwrenching.  So much detail of the reality of everyday life...just the stack of bills alone was frightening!

Awesome start.



Author's Response: Thanks, Mari2Anne! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Sometime I get bogged down by my habit for mundane details but I'm glad the seem to add to the story.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/19/2009

You know, by the time I get done reading all these awesome chapters (I'm a slow reader and your chapters are sooo beautifully long), you're probably going to get bored of hearing this, but I love your attention to all the small details.

And I really liked this line, don't ask me why, it just totally appealed to me that Clark said it:

[quote]: Clark made a face. “Why do girls blab all their business to each other?” he said irritably. [quote]

Really great story...



Author's Response:

Haha, Sue likes that line, too!

 

 I love your taking the time to tell me how you are enjoying the story. It's so nice to hear.

Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/21/2009

Yay, Martha; great advice, he did need a break.  But what I liked best is that Clark wanted Chloe to go along and that HE ASKED HER!!!  And she didn't even think to say no!  I was soooo impressed.

Loved it.

Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/21/2009

Investigative, curious reporter to the end; not letting anything like a vacation get in her way.

I have only been on one cruise vacation and you seem to have described it quite well...the endless food; made me hungry just to read about it; and the non-stop activity choices... I think you've made me realize it's time for a vacation.

Loved the sleepy floater scene.

But first, on to the next chapter:  very curious about this thief... 

 



Author's Response:

I have acutally never been on a cruise, I had to pump my LJfriends list for research purposes! One of my flisters in particular LOVES them and has been on three or four- as thanks I gave a shout-out and let her and her boyfriend win the couples' game, hee.

The sleepy floater chapter actually was on the cutting room floor when I was worried about the length, but I re-added it because I thought it was important to show just how much they can be themselves around each other. It's also a shout-out to Tobywolf, whose Daddy Clark floats, and I think it's so cute.

Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/21/2009

Completely adored jealous Clark, tossing that  Mr Good Dancer's phone number in the trash; I cheered!

Whoa!  Was there green-K liquid in that sushi sauce?  Is the friend from Smallville not a friend?  He tried to warn Clark; very intriguing...

Hurrying off to read the next chapter.

I loved how Chloe is taking care of Clark.

 

Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/21/2009

Very, very sexy chapters.  And funny, too: "... the energizer bunny..."

Still laughing...

Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Reviewer: Mari2Anne (Signed)
08/21/2009

[quote]: 

"Clark is right, Chloe thought. We’re really not that complicated." 

I'm almost afraid to read the last chapter... I so don't want them to make it complicated again...

 

Awesome story... your attention to details didn't stop at their exploration of their feelings and fears for each other.



Author's Response: Hee, I'll let you in on a secret for future reference- I will go for the happy ending 99% of the time! ;-)
Chapter 8: Chapter 8