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Reviewer: UnknownUnseenUnheard (Signed)
08/30/2012 23:30
Huh. End. That was faster than I expected. Good start. I'm going to go read the sequel now!
Chapter 6
Reviewer: UnknownUnseenUnheard (Signed)
08/30/2012 23:23
Someone's forward.
Hmm.
I predict Lana will freak out.
Chapter 5
Reviewer: UnknownUnseenUnheard (Signed)
08/30/2012 23:18
Chloe's reaction is hilarious, even if it is a bit much. Sure, he was tactless. But, this is Chloe. She usually doesn't get that pissed at him over something like that. At least, not that late in game.
Anyways, good chapter.
Chapter 4
Reviewer: UnknownUnseenUnheard (Signed)
08/30/2012 23:14
The startling moment of epiphany. Good chapter.
Chapter 3
Reviewer: UnknownUnseenUnheard (Signed)
08/30/2012 23:09
The sex slave bit made me laugh.
Good chapter, even if its short.
Chapter 2
Reviewer: UnknownUnseenUnheard (Signed)
08/30/2012 23:04
Huh.
Good start.
There isn't much else to say, so...
I'm going to go read the next chapter now.
Chapter 1
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