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And clark...my heart broke for him, living with the pain of knowing that Chloe's forgotten herself, him, and everything they've ever been through.
The lovemaking was so intensely emotional, I nearly wept. And when she called him Clark, I actually did. Then his tears after, when she said he carried Chloe in his heart...
I'll stop here, before I start bawling again. :(
This story was perfect, Firebunny. Simply perfect. Thanks so much for writing it, and for sharing it!
Clark will always need his Chloe. I'm not much of a Peter Pan fan myself, so maybe I can't appreciate this to it's full extent, however, I do love Chlark and the idea that Clark remains within Chloe's live no matter what is touching.
Does Lena have Chloe's memories or am I to assume there's some mistaken identity here? I'm going with the later.
omg that was heartbreaking. I got teary eyed :(
Firebunny, you can write the funniest stuff and the most tragic. This was truly a beautifully written story. I take it that Chloe is in some sort of a psych ward and has forgotten her past somehow? Gah, this story was beautiful.
Thank you, Justine, for the nice words.
Yes, Chloe's in a psych ward, but I think Lex has somehow drugged her into insanity. It's only vaguely hinted at in the story, so I don't really expect anyone to pick up on it.