I love the poetry in your language.
I love this line
Above all things, even more than his immortality, he curses his photographic memory.
I think it would be a curse to be immortal and unable to forget.
Thank you so much! I'm a great admirer (and reader) of poetry, so I consider this a high compliment!
And yes, it would be terrible to outlive everyone you love. But to be haunted by all your memories in perfect detail would be both a blessing and a curse, I think.
Thanks again for you kind words!