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Reviewer: Djf1973 (Signed)
06/16/2014 03:56

Happy belated birthday Dee!!!! Always loved this story!

Chapter 9
Reviewer: Clark TTF (Signed)
08/26/2013 22:59

I'm the only one to review this story; That is quite unfortunate. This was a very...gutting story. Not only did this story rip out all hope I had more than once; it left me reading word after word before I could even consier stopping myself. I remember looking at the clock seeing it was about eight and before I knew it the story was over, everybody was happy, and it was only 9:30! I really like what you did with the story; especially going to the comics and pulling the glass jar out of your hat! I never really considered what would have happened if that had been the real chloe he had saved that night. I thought you left Lois's involvement in the story way too open, it felt as if there was a gap but that might have been my glee as she magically vanished (At least long enough we can hope). Great story;totally deserving of w/e the blue ribbon means!



Author's Response:

“I'm the only one to review this story; That is quite unfortunate.”

 

I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you thought of it, Clark TFF! :-D

 

“This was a very...gutting story. Not only did this story rip out all hope I had more than once; it left me reading word after word before I could even consider stopping myself. I remember looking at the clock seeing it was about eight and before I knew it the story was over, everybody was happy, and it was only 9:30!”

Oh, that’s the best comment EVER!  I’m so glad you found the story engaging, and even though I pulled at your heartstrings on several occasions, it’s always my intention to go for the happy ending. ;-)

“I really like what you did with the story; especially going to the comics and pulling the glass jar out of your hat! I never really considered what would have happened if that had been the real chloe he had saved that night.”

 

I was very intrigued by the deleted scene where Chloe’s sitting in the bath in Clark’s house, still wearing her coat.  He comes in and wraps his arms around her, and even though I knew from the spoilers that she would turn out to be someone else, I couldn’t help but wish that that moment had happened between the real Chloe and Clark. :-)

“I thought you left Lois's involvement in the story way too open, it felt as if there was a gap but that might have been my glee as she magically vanished (At least long enough we can hope).”

I think it’s realistic to think that she might never return.  The ring was formatted by the Legion to take Doomsday to the end of time, so…you never know!  But I didn’t want to have to worry about Lois if I didn’t have to, especially when I had to weave a story around a stroppy fourteen-year old Chlark kid with parent issues, plus try and find a way to get Chloe and Clark back together!

“Great story; totally deserving of w/e the blue ribbon means!”

 

Thank you!  I think that means the story was specially featured; I’m not sure.  But I love it, too!  :-D

 

 

Brilliant review, babes.  Much appreciated! :-)

Part I - Prologue
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